I sharing my short writing

chiuandy123

Topic : Environmental protection

Do you think I will environmental protection? Nowadays, Hong Kong  ...
一碌木 發表於 18-3-2013 20:41

   Although there are some mistakes, at least you try! Keep going!

chiuandy123

Last but not least, "Please help me with an error" should be changed to "please help me to point out ...
一人力 發表於 24-3-2013 19:43

   Be honest, I don't think that is a passage come from a senior secondary student.

chiuandy123

Thank you Reply,
I English is really not good, but I will never gave up learning English
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一碌木 發表於 25-3-2013 19:41

   It doesn't really matter. But you should practice more so as to enhance your English level! Add oil!

chiuandy123

Start embarking on English newspaper or book may enhance your english level.
lonelyhunter 發表於 18-4-2013 20:21

   Yep, it is definitely an effective way to learn English